Felisha was a model who was famous all over the world. She decided to get her hair dyed so that she looked prettier. When she got to the hairdresser’s, everyone applauded her and bowed to her. She was basically royalty. For her hair she chose a deep, dark black. After awhile, they said her hair was ready. When she saw it … it was the wrong color … It was hot pink! “AAHHHHH!” she screamed, “I am suing you all! I hate you! This place will be bankrupt by the time I’m done with it! AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!”
Dear Ava,
I really liked how you included all capital letters in some words.
I wish you would’ve named the people when you said “everyone.”
I wonder what Felisha did after this?
Sincerely, Elijah
PS: Check out the rest of my Mystery Michael series here: https://blog.elanco.org/riehle926/category/series/
Dear Elijah,
Thank you for liking my story! I will try to be more detailed in my future stories. Felisha is so cray cray (crazy)! I hope we can stay in touch and become writing buddies.
Your friend,
Ava
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